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Friday, April 15, 2005

Bunty Aur Babli

Bunty And Babli got along great from the day they met.
Bunty was in kerala all his life...until recently when fate brought him to Madras.
Babli lived in Adam street in Mylapore,Madras.Pattu maami was the world to her.She was her mother,friend,guide..just about everything.She treated her like she was a little child..She would often cuddle and hug her...
You must be wondering why pattu maami named her "Babli" instead of some Gayathri or lakshmi.Thats bcos Babli was adopted when she was small.She was found on the streets lying helpless.Pattu maami ,a kind soul,took her in her arms and from then on she has been growing up in her house. Everything was fine in their little world until Bunty arrived.
It was a hot day and Babli skipping in front of her house,noticed Bunty slowly walking down the street.Bunty was tall,dark and very handsome.He had greenish eyes.He would have looked evil if not for his cute little mustache.Babli on the other hand was very fair.She was quite a beauty.Well!Opposites do attract..
Instant liking was what it was.They would meet everyday at a park near Babli's house and stand there talking.
Can any love story be so right n easy?There has to be some confusion,some problem.So it was that Pattu maami hated Bunty.She could not stand the sight of him.Everytime he crossed her path she would mutter under her breath..and glare at him...But Bunty was a cool chap and he just shrugged it off..
Bunty influenced Babli in many ways..Bunty loved sea food.Babli had never gone near it because pattu mami was strictly vegeterian and would cry "Shiva!Shiva!" at the smell of anything close to meat.One fine day,Bunty got some steaming hot fish curry for Babli to try and as luck would have it,Pattu maami walked into the park..and glared at them..Babli ran away while Bunty shaking could not hold on to the fish and dropped it on pattu maami.He stood there shocked. Pattu maami went wild and was disgusted.Hate grew even worse.
Bunty found the place unsuitable for him and wanted to leave.He asked Babli if she would run away with him.She would not hear it.After all pattu maami cared so much for her and had brought her up to what she was today.

Things kept going on this way when suddenly Babli fell ill one day.She lied curled up in her bed the whole day..This was the first day Bunty had stayed without seeing Babli.He kept roaming near her house hoping to get a glimpse of his sweet heart.But alas!!No such luck...He went to bed feeling lonely and miserable.He could not sleep.So he got up determined to see Babli somehow.He jumped the wall to her house and went to the back yard.He sat there thinking how to get in when suddenly he heard someone coughing.It was Pattu Maami!!He started cursing the gods...Pattu maami caught sight of his green eyes and screamed so loud that Bunty went nearly deaf.
He sprinted out...Pattu maami's screams attracted the street dogs.They chased him and he could not escape their rabid bites..All for love!
The next day Babli felt much better and came out and looked for Bunty here and there.She could not spot him and saw Pattu maami walking down the corridor.She meowed for milk.She was hungry.

21 Comments:

At 8:58 AM, Blogger Sriram said...

awww.. nice try at story writing. seriously, it is good! keep goin with more!

 
At 9:27 AM, Blogger saranyan said...

hey, the ending twist was awesome :)
keep writing.....

 
At 9:28 AM, Blogger saranyan said...

and actually I did imagine a guy like that, and I when I placed the green eyes on him, it wasn't good :) thankfully you revealed that it isn't a guy, after all :)

 
At 12:38 PM, Blogger WA said...

Nicely written Prabha. Keep them coming

 
At 7:02 PM, Blogger JaganLee said...

Is it ur story? I remember reading a similar one long back.

 
At 7:51 PM, Blogger F e r r a r i said...

Prabha. Nee kadhai ellam kooda ezhuduviya. good good. Nalla irukku story. Madras maanathe kaapathite :-D

 
At 1:51 AM, Blogger Prabha said...

Sriram,
Thanks!!:)

Saranyan,
Thanks!!And yea guy with green eyes..yikes!!!

uma,
Hi Uma!!Thanks

jaganlee,
:( I wrote it!!eppadi sollitiye..!!
just kidding :)

Prabhu,
Madras maanatha kaapathitena??:)

 
At 12:20 AM, Blogger REFLEX said...

unakku vera velai illaya :). ennavo Bunty yaam Bubli yaam.

 
At 1:39 AM, Blogger Prabha said...

:((
cha..unakku kalai rasanai pattaadhu..kazhudhaikku theriyuma karpoora vasanai??;)

 
At 3:04 AM, Blogger Santiago Maria Alex said...

Dear Prabs,

Super animal love story po... Asathila.. I can find Animal Planets influence on you.. lol.. Jus kinding buds.. go ahead with your good work.

 
At 3:26 AM, Blogger reNUka said...

adadada da!!!! i know our famous director shankar - will surely ask him take up ur story. be ready with the script. or will steven spielberg be ok - bcos he has already taken jurassic park - and hey u can even name the movie as 'feline park' - eppadi idea??? :D

jus kiddin... i seriously didnt know they were cats the first time i read it - this being so, the ending was something like these art movies where u wudnt know if the movie realy got over!!! :-( but then after i fixed that our bunty and babli were cats, i was able to visualise it properly. :))

 
At 7:16 AM, Blogger Prabha said...

lexi,
thanks..yea ellam animal planet influence dhaan ;)

Renu,
thanks da :)) feline park..nice name..*imagining how it wud be*
:D anupichudaren spielberg kitta en scripta ;)

 
At 8:03 AM, Blogger Prabz said...

prabhaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
tall.. dark.. handsome.. un taste-oooo apdinu ninaichu mela padicha.. green eyes.. got really confused.. apram andha end!! Man.. shaad ali mattum idhay ketana.. :)

 
At 12:21 PM, Blogger sensiblystoned said...

Neat!!! What a coincidence with the posts. However yours was on a serious note with a good ending making it more like I story. While I was babbling and doodling as usual. :)

 
At 2:49 AM, Blogger barath said...

nice story.The way you have written is perfect.i read similar kind of story in kumudam(oru pakka kadhai)

 
At 5:56 AM, Blogger Prabha said...

Prabz,
eppo dhaan tharaikku erangee vandhirukkanu nanaikaren ;)?
Tall,dark,handsome mebbe my taste..but appadi ellam en kannukku yaarum padardhu ellai..enna pannardhu? :)

sensibly stoned,
hi!!urs was really good..didnt think it was dabbling :)

barath,
seriousa kumudam lendhu naa edha adikala ;)

 
At 9:05 AM, Blogger Manish said...

Nice Blog.
I dont need to watch "Bunty Aur Babli" now. :)

 
At 10:02 AM, Blogger Eroteme said...

When I saw the title I thought it was a movie review...
Nice manner in which you held back the idea that they were cats and nicer fashion of introducing it... Good show...
Sorry for the delay in visiting your blog and wish you a wonderful year ahead too... Puththaandu vaayythikkal/vaazhthikkal

 
At 11:57 PM, Blogger Prabha said...

Manish
:)Thanks

Eroteme,
Hi!Wish u the same!!

 
At 6:59 AM, Blogger Sangeeta said...

hey..nice story..and i was kind of surprised in the end...hehehehe..seems like a PURRfect story

 
At 7:33 PM, Blogger Tomas said...

Good morning, I find it quite refreshing to occasionally find a post such as yours with a different topic completely. It somehow ads to ones little list of lifes experiences.

I seem to have a soft spot for blogs related to article directory and /or sites that have a central theme around article directory type items. I guess this comes from being a webmaster as well.

Once again, thank you, hope you don't mind if I visit again next month.

 

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